One thought on “Revised Sentences

  1. Original:
    “There were some noticeable differences between the original and revised version of the opening scene.”
    Revised:
    “Orwell’s revised opening had some stark differences that dramatically influenced my first impression of the book.”

    Original:
    “His book was so successful because everything he talked about could have been a reality for the rest of the world given the right timing and circumstances.”
    Revised:
    “1984 connected and spoke to the audience due to the horrifying reality of Stalin during and after World War II.”

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